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Post by hydroxianchaos on Jun 7, 2010 20:50:09 GMT -5
Now if I can only gave a good background. Whaddya think, Ness?
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Post by hydroxianchaos on Jun 7, 2010 20:54:00 GMT -5
...*sniff* Hello?... anyone?!
I finished my first webcomic. Please....?
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Post by bloodmeta on Jun 7, 2010 21:09:06 GMT -5
Well, a full review might help.
First off, try and work on your art man. It looks good, I'll give ya that, but it doesn't seem your style. So, go around and draw everything you can
No, I'm being serious here. I did just that and I found my profession in art. I now draw awesomely. So, draw it in every style you can. Anime, cartoony, realistic, whatever the case, draw it. That's how the Blue Dog (one of the awesomest drawings ever) was created, because someone drew out their imagination. So, do it.
Also, may wanna back up on the speed, keed. While it still looks good, it looks a bit rushed. For instance, you forgot the strand of hair on Ness' forehead. As well as in the third panel, you forgot the guy's glasses. Make sure you spend some time on it. No shading or anything, but just make sure you get everything right.
All in all, I rate this....ehh.... 7.5/10
Good job, bro.
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Post by hydroxianchaos on Jun 7, 2010 21:22:35 GMT -5
Thanks. It wasn't serious or anything, I just sort of sketched and smoothened it. I also have already thought of the whole "Draw everything you can" thing. Fuck, I've been doing that all my life. It WAS rushed because I only planned on doing it for a REALLY small gag. I also have VERY little time on my hands. In total, I only did it in a few hours (Paper to Drawing tablet takes like, 2-3 hours, with smoothening of course). Now, when I actually TRY... You will be awestruck of my awesomeness. I can draw, it's just that I don't really have the time to fix things, ya know? I already know what style I'm drawing (American drawn. Japanese styled emotions. It sounds bad, but belive me, I can do it properly) I just need the time. Again, my drawings look fucking authentic when I actually put more time an effort.
Long story short, I can draw as good as the next webcomic artist, I don't have the time to make it look good. (In the summer when I have more time I might be making the most epic comics you have ever seen.)
I think I might also edit this comic a bit, you know, like more shading and detail. But I probably won't.
Edit: IS IT AT LEAST AS GOOD AS QUACKER AND BOWEN?! ;_;
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Post by bloodmeta on Jun 7, 2010 21:41:24 GMT -5
Edit: IS IT AT LEAST AS GOOD AS QUACKER AND BOWEN?! ;_; NO
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Post by hydroxianchaos on Jun 7, 2010 21:57:30 GMT -5
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Post by Pyro on Jun 7, 2010 22:09:12 GMT -5
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Post by bloodmeta on Jun 7, 2010 22:18:21 GMT -5
Really, I just looked at it, and the only thing I laughed at was his emotional BAAAAWWWING about how hard his life is going. Really, if your comic was as bad as this, I would consider you to be the equivalent of beauty just to that of the Offended page. Your's actually has a pretty good joke. I'd admit, I chuckled a bit, because it's rather true. Also, that comic has brought me back the reason of why I hate furfags (at least the 99% of them) the most on the internets. Seriously, if it weren't for all those SUPAH KAWAII DESU =^-^= pedophilia fuckers who like yiff and shit, I would actually consider furries okay. Really, this guy should commit suicide. He's a waste of space for this world. He has a King Midas touch, only everything he touches turned to shitWhelp, here's another bad comic to go along with the others.
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Post by hydroxianchaos on Jun 7, 2010 22:21:19 GMT -5
Thank you. At least I now know that there is at least one webcomic worse than mine.
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Post by Pyro on Jun 7, 2010 22:24:19 GMT -5
Eh... the only reason I said no was because of your speech bubbles... Eh... Work on your bubbles and work on size comparison, because the spikes on the hedgehog guy go down too far... Unless they are supposed to or if that's because it's hair...
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Post by hydroxianchaos on Jun 7, 2010 22:35:30 GMT -5
They are supposed to be like that. Again, it mostly a sketch, so I rushed all of it. But yeah, they are supposed to be like that.
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Post by bloodmeta on Jun 8, 2010 13:03:54 GMT -5
Well, hey, going back, you said you didn't have a lot of time on your hands? Then make some, dammit. Do what you want for a period of time, then go back to your work. Trust me, it's better than rushing. Also, don't get too half-assed about the time, otherwise, the major work you need to do will just turn into shit.
Don't learn that the hard way, trust me, seen someone do it, and they got shat on.
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Post by hydroxianchaos on Jun 8, 2010 13:13:07 GMT -5
No, the thing is, there is someone staying in my house. And guess what? That person lives in the only room that has a computer in which I can use my drawing tablet on. And very fucking rare occasions, no one is home. Sorry that I was being vague, it's just that it is a little personal (I'm doing this on my itouch). If they weren't there, I would actually have all the time I need, so much, that even if I rush it would look better. That pretty much explains everything. If you have seen my animations, (Go back a page in fan art and look in "Meh animations") you would see that I do put much effort into my work.
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