Kryso And Mitsu Darkness
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Post by Kryso And Mitsu Darkness on Nov 22, 2008 18:52:23 GMT -5
Kryso was sitting by a tree branch, sipping hot chocolate. It was windy out, but Kryso still didn't have a coat on. "Ahhh...it's nice to finally have peace. I've been fighting and fighting Mitsu, and I never got any peace...", Kryso said. Just then, Mitsu appeared, with a bloody knife. "What do you want, Mitsu?", Kryso said. "Nothing except you to die!", Mitsu replied. "shhh! Listen to that sound! Its coming from the star posts!", Kryso said. "Must be my buddies from Anti-Mobius.", Mitsu said. "Buddies? What buddies?", Kryso said. "Excuse me? You haven't heard of anti-mobius?", Mitsu replied with a frown. "No I haven't.", Kryso replied with a smirk. "Lets get out of here before your buddies attack us!" "Me? Mitsu Kritsu Darkness? Never! They're my BUDDIES, Kryso!", Mitsu replied with a angry look on her face. Just then, Mitsu's buddies came out of the ring. Anti-Frizzy, Anti-Rower, and Anti-Snowy came out. "Hey, Mitsu!", Anti-Frizzy said with a smile on her face, her sunglasses covering her eyes. "Hey, Mitsu.", Anti-Rower said with a smile on her face. "hmmph.", Anti-Snowy said with a frown on her face. "Now that we've said our hellos, lets attack Kryso!" "Yeah!", Anti-Rower said. "Lets attack!", Anti-Frizzy said with a smile on her face. "Anti-Dopplegangers, Attack!", Anti-Snowy said. Anti-Snowy, Anti-Rower, and Anti-Frizzy run towards Kryso. "What did I do?", Kryso said with a worried look on her face. "We despise you, and so does Mitsu!", The Anti-Doppelgangers say. **Poor Kryso! She can't teleport, because she doesn't know how! Will she escape?"
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Post by TailsDollFan on Nov 24, 2008 17:08:03 GMT -5
Hurr Hurr, Jigglypuff. Yeah, I know it's you. Anyway, at least you improved upon your literature.
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Kryso and Mitsu Darkness
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Post by Kryso and Mitsu Darkness on Dec 6, 2008 12:42:01 GMT -5
Thanks. That means a lot!
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Master Silver
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Welcome to my happy world, now pack your shit and leave!
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Post by Master Silver on Dec 6, 2008 13:37:35 GMT -5
Wow, she actually learned about punctuation, too.
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Adria
Research & Development
GET OFF MAH LAWN.
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Post by Adria on Dec 7, 2008 22:03:44 GMT -5
Her stories are still bland, though. Read a book, MEP. seriously!
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Post by TailsDollFan on Dec 9, 2008 7:38:48 GMT -5
Yeah, I was about to tell her that, too. =/ MEP, you keep on seeming to chuck the same story line out over and over again with very slight plot twists that weren't too great at first. MEP, you need some creativity to make your story interesting. And you need to give your characters a personality, or else they're boring.
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