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Post by haziel on Aug 9, 2009 13:16:18 GMT -5
(I decided to do a story without ANY CHARACTERS IN IT!)
There is a machine, all it did was compress metal into small balls. The balls, one day, over-encumbered the container. This is when the machine broke, and these spheres spilled all over the place. These eventually jammed the machine, by the spheres getting jammed into the gears, and this caused flows of metal that filled the room. The cooling and shaping system had been malfunctioned, and all the metal had not cooled. Anyone that stepped in, they could not go further, and the first one that opened it released the hot metal liquid. This eventually malfunctioned the moving unit in the outside to supply the metal, and this made the machinery pick up anything it saw with its sensors. This made the humans that worked at the lab drop drastically, and this decreased who worked the machinery. With no one to transport the spheres, and no spheres to transport, the machinery began to break down, and the machine for transport became unused... Eventually resulting in it coming down on the lab. Coming down on the lab, this resulted in a broken utility. Oh this was horrible (I am going to update this later.)
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Post by Jigglypuff...is mad ._. on Aug 9, 2009 15:39:29 GMT -5
I really like it. It's a good start.
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