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Post by zackthefox on Jun 25, 2009 10:17:26 GMT -5
This is about a new fox at Cherrysmile Elementary school and no one likes her because of her attitude and the way she dresses. When she suddenly makes a best friend, her best friend turns on her and tries to gather the 7 chaos emeralds to make a time rift, it's up to the new fox (Cherry) to stop her herself. Can she stop her?
Chapter 1: Moving AGAIN
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Post by bloodmeta on Jun 26, 2009 9:07:22 GMT -5
Hmm Sound Interesting Enough... I'll Watch!
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Post by zackthefox on Jun 26, 2009 9:52:32 GMT -5
Uh, I have to post Chapter 1 for this. Cuz I'm a guest and I can't modify my post.
Chapter 1: Moving AGAIN
I hate moving. We've moved 5 times. Alabama to Flordia, Flordia to Texas, Texas to Maryland and back to Alabama. Then to Fairport, NY. Everytime I moved, everyone made fun of me because of the way I dressed and my attitude. I had a cresent shaped birthmark on my forehead. Everyone also made fun of me for that.
At Cherry's house...
I woke up with a smile on my face. I got out of my bed and walked to the kitchen. I saw my parents reading the newspaper. They read it every morning for updates and tragic events.
"Cherry, we need to tell you something." My mom said as she put the newspaper down.
"Yeah?" I asked, sitting down in a chair.
"We're moving to Canada." My mom said.
"Why? You heard of the war that's going on!" I shouted.
"I have no other choice, Cherry." My dad got in the conversation.
"My boss told me the army leader wants me to join them."
"But dad! You'll--" I started to say.
"No buts. I know you were going to say, 'But dad! You'll get hurt and maybe die!' " My dad said.
"I hate you! All you care about is your stupid job and never care about me!" I screamed. I walked to my room walked in. I slammed the door.
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Post by backdrop on Jul 16, 2009 16:51:21 GMT -5
hmmm seems interesting :/
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Post by zackthefox on Jul 16, 2009 17:57:21 GMT -5
(Thanks guys)
Chapter 1 (continued)
"Cherrie, you know I'm too busy with my job--" Dad started to say.
"Ronald, you've been off for weeks," Mom interrupted dad.
"You should atleast spend time with Cherry while you can." Dad didn't say anything after that.
Chapter 2: Dad spends more time with me...or not...?
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Post by bloodmeta on Jul 20, 2009 12:25:35 GMT -5
 I'm Sorry... This Was Before...  So Yeah I Forgive You |
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Post by zackthefox on Jul 21, 2009 10:44:39 GMT -5
Eh...Bloodmeta...I said I was sorry...--
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Post by coolguy6778 on Dec 26, 2009 7:53:47 GMT -5
nice!
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So Yeah I Forgive You