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Post by zashtc on Mar 28, 2010 10:34:05 GMT -5
Chapter 1| I always hated moving, and that day 6 years ago was no exception. Im 12 now so if you dont know math I was 6. This is the story of why im telling you this, you might not get it now you will see in the future
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Post by Jojenga on Mar 28, 2010 16:46:53 GMT -5
 ALL ABOARD THE FAILURE EXPRESS |
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Post by Pyro on Mar 28, 2010 18:34:08 GMT -5
Space, the final frontier. These are the voyages of the Startrain, Enterprise. To explore strange new worlds. To seek out new life and new civilizations. And to boldly facepalm where no man has facepalmed before!  |
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Post by Chaosky on Mar 28, 2010 22:33:04 GMT -5
You sir, Win. Forever.
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Post by Luna on Mar 29, 2010 5:57:49 GMT -5
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Post by Shadow Doll on Mar 29, 2010 9:52:15 GMT -5
People people PEOPLE! At least give the little guy a chance!
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Post by Pyro on Mar 29, 2010 17:32:59 GMT -5
People people PEOPLE! At least give the little guy a chance!  You don't seem to get it. If this guy will write like shit (poor grammar, bad spelling, and no plot behind this) he doesn't deserve one. He hasn't even posted more than a paragraph. I already see several cliches, so it sucks so far. |
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Post by Shadow Doll on Mar 29, 2010 17:57:39 GMT -5
Ah.
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Post by Jojenga on Apr 9, 2010 15:57:27 GMT -5
and now to revive this topic to bash it (and possibly myself) some more!
The first chapter in this basically sums up the entire first chapter of Twilight, thats how bad they both are.
(And yes, i read the whole first book, and proceeded to do to it what JamesNintendoNerd does to shitty games <3)
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Post by G-Virus on Apr 9, 2010 21:03:00 GMT -5
IMPERSONATION TIME!!!!!!!!!!
ZashTC: nu! Tahts nawt how et goez!
Chap2: i finaly ariveed at the new hoam. I cehcked it owt a leetle. Tehn, tals dol apeered!!!!
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Post by Shadow Doll on Apr 12, 2010 17:32:00 GMT -5
HA! Let me guess...
Albert Einstein!
*Sarcastic voice used above*
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