|
Post by Shadow Doll on May 20, 2010 9:42:10 GMT -5
Yeah, sorry about that. I'm still new at fanfics. It was meant as a comedy/action. I had to describe what was gong on for readers ho were new to some of these characters. This isn't the only place I'm posting this up on you know. But, someone let me know how you liked the twist at the end, since I am ;making a sequel. This time, from a first-person perspective.
|
|
|
Post by hydroxianchaos on May 20, 2010 19:46:48 GMT -5
Oooohhhh first person! Me likie! *shot*
Let me guess... from the players point of view? As in Geoffrey's point of view?
|
|
|
Post by Shadow Doll on May 20, 2010 21:01:49 GMT -5
Yeah. Howd you guess? *shot* seriously though, yes.
|
|
|
Post by hydroxianchaos on May 20, 2010 21:20:32 GMT -5
Fine by me. It was a great fan fic, and although more action would be good, dialogue is great for this kind of story, a comedy.
And it desperately needs to contain pingas and win. *shot*
|
|
|
Post by Shadow Doll on May 24, 2010 14:32:56 GMT -5
Thanks! Can't wait to revise and edit for the final draft! any ideas for the sequel? I kinda gave up on the SSB sequel. Unless, I have them go to every world...They go to Andross, Mushroom kingdom, etc., any other ideas though? anyone?
|
|
|
Post by hydroxianchaos on May 24, 2010 14:57:03 GMT -5
Put Mobius, wait, did I miss it? I probably missed a paragraph by accident. But if you don't know much, then I recomend that you get some archie comics from either Sonic Universe, or Sonic the hedgehog. But if you want to base it on the video game, I recomend you get your sources from wikipedia stuff. Just try to find a good timeline and info and it'll be fine. I just said the thing above 'cause I have a subscription to the Sonic the Hedgehog Comic series. (Sonic Universe is a version almost identical to the original series only it also has ALL of the characters from the game in it) Go on YouTube and search for a few issues to understand the whole timeline on the comic. There are now 212 issues for Sonic the hedgehog. But more would prefer the video game series so I guess more would like it that way :l
|
|
|
Post by Shadow Doll on May 24, 2010 15:11:32 GMT -5
I know a lot about sonic and friends. Mainly about Shadow. He gets a huge shining chance in this one! Just wait. I'll be working on it (hopefully) over Summer Break!
|
|
|
Post by hydroxianchaos on May 24, 2010 15:20:07 GMT -5
Aw... No comic reference?
Edit: Say, no one has been posting in life at the lab lately...weird...
|
|
|
Post by Shadow Doll on Jun 16, 2010 18:26:27 GMT -5
Yeah, that place used to be so popular...
|
|