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Post by Jojenga on May 19, 2009 22:19:42 GMT -5
just something i came up with during school when i was bored...
also, i need help adding a few lyrics soo...yeah
here we go.
Don't you see?
The Dark is covering me...
it makes me unhappy
dead inside...
I wish that I weren't alive...
When I die,
No one will say goodbye...
No one will leave alive
And today...THE SUN WILL NEVER RISE AGAIN!!!
Don't you feel the darkness...
it can take your soul away,
but never feel that sometimes...
you could EVER RUN AWAY!!!
Reach out for the darkness...
I'm laughing at your pain...
you mindlessly commit crimes...
Because of your Master's game...
Heed the darkness...
I see you...and hear everything you do...
can you feel the darkness too?
It's getting through...
You're now a slave, brand new...
(i need help with the rest of the lyrics)
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Post by G-Virus on May 20, 2009 3:10:27 GMT -5
Sweet. You totally made a song that would seem fit for Halloween. Nice job.
Next lyrics should probably be something about go do my bidding and stuff like that.
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Post by Luna on May 20, 2009 6:13:52 GMT -5
*Claps*
It's also singable. (Now that I woud remember how CYFTS went)
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Post by Jojenga on May 20, 2009 6:25:20 GMT -5
Now you're here...do everything out of fear...
cause that is all you hear
That today...THE SUN WILL NEVER RISE AGAIN!!!
Don't you feel the darkness...
it can take your soul away,
but never feel that sometimes...
you could EVER RUN AWAY!!!
Reach out for the darkness...
I'm laughing at your pain...
you mindlessly commit crimes...
Because of your Master's game...
Just look all around
Souls you will be taking, every last day
now go, my slave AND SLAY!!
Do you feel it?
(ooohh is replaced with evil laughter)
Don't you feel it?
(oh is replaced with a demonic roar)
Do you feel it?
(evil laughter)
Don't you feel it?
Don't you feel the darkness...
it can take your soul away,
(take your soul away...)
but never feel that sometimes...
you could EVER RUN AWAY!!!
Reach out for the darkness...
I'm laughing at your pain...
you mindlessly commit crimes...
Because of your Master's game...
Don't you feel the darkness...
it can take your soul away,
(take your soul away...)
but never feel that sometimes...
you could EVER RUN AWAY!!!
(don't EVER RUN AWAY!)
Reach out for the darkness...
I'm laughing at your pain...
you mindlessly commit crimes...
Because of your Master's game...
and so forth....hehehe...
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Post by Razer on May 20, 2009 23:30:21 GMT -5
I could imagine Marilyn Manson singing this.
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Post by Jojenga on May 21, 2009 4:43:24 GMT -5
I could imagine Marilyn Manson singing this. I second that motion *raises hand* |
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Post by G-Virus on May 21, 2009 12:06:51 GMT -5
I could imagine him and Slayer and Metalica singing this.
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Post by Jojenga on May 21, 2009 15:12:34 GMT -5
I could imagine him and Slayer and Metalica singing this. Yeah...just imagine if someone recorded this into a metal song, with the techno beats changed to badass guitar riffs? *hinthint* |
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Post by G-Virus on May 21, 2009 17:31:12 GMT -5
It'd sound weird.
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Post by The lonely wanderer on Jul 14, 2009 21:08:07 GMT -5
the one i made is only an opposite of cyfts chorus:
Can you feel the darkness?
does it darken up your day?
dont you feel that sometimes
u just cant seem to run away?
pull back from the sunshine,
remember all the rain,
forget about the good times,
for they will never come back again.
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Post by gloabalgothian on Jul 15, 2009 3:40:50 GMT -5
All these lyrics going around sound like pomes.....neat keep up the good work I might have one.
Can you feel my hands around your neck?
As it gets harder for you to breath
Your skin feels softer than a morning breazz.
Eyes remind me of my next meal
"Why didn't you just play with me?"
Sadly this way it'll be less painful.
You look into my eyes
Only fear remains
Wheres the anger
The hatrated that once cloulded your mind?
Whats the matter with you why didn't you hide?!
You thought I'd give you mercy
Well you were wrong.
Beneath my feet you stare
With only fear
"Why?!"
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